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In my thesis, I report the results from three experiments exploring how user interfaces present throughout the feedback exchange process influence feedback composition, interpretation, and utilization. In the first experiment, we examine how various combinations of constructive and summative feedback influence a creator’s perceptions of the feedback and the revisions they subsequently perform. Participants (N=441) wrote and revised short stories when presented with quality scores, pre-authored constructive comments, both scores and comments, or no feedback. We found that while showing scores can have marginal benefits compared to showing no feedback, constructive comments without scores led to the most favorable feedback perceptions and revisions. In the second experiment, we investigate how feedback’s level of detail influences perceptions of the feedback by both the provider and recipient, and how these perceptions translate to revisions and creative outcomes. 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